Alg: Review notesEs: review notesEng: Essay due FridayGlobal: Read Ch. 5, section 4 & complete worksheetWriting Tip
"Show me, Don’t Tell me"
But what, exactly, are "telling" and "showing?" Telling is another way of saying “summarizing.” Here’s a writer “telling” readers about a room:
"It was a nice room, a warm room. It was a happy place to be." (You just told me, and bored be to death.)
Here is a different writer showing me by using vivid language
"Sunlight pours through the window, pooling on the down comforter which lies across the bed. A block of light also angles across the wall opposite the bed, highlighting the pale orange color of the room. A thick red carpet sprawls over the floor, a corner of it lit too by a sunbeam; the room’s windows admit the sun along two walls, and tiny dust particles hover in the bright streaks which glaze the room."